Saturday, June 6, 2009

Raindrop kiss

Do you remember,we were traveling ..
It was raining,heavily,with all the rhythms
We were traveling without a reason,destiny

you asked me one thing,I will never forget
Have you ever seen how a raindrop laugh?
I gazed at you with all my passions

We were sharing a shawl.
I could feel the smell of your skin
Its like a fresh news paper
I were so secure there

My conscience was melting
I opened my eyes with a slight alarm
I felt those raindrops on my cheek
It was worth every second of bliss

I remember that kiss like it was now
I wanted to stay in rain.
Every time I think of that moment
I think of my raindrop kiss.

I will be traveling this weekend
but you wont be there
why it is that you cant keep your promise?
I know that I am keeping mine...

9 comments:

  1. ''I could feel the smell of your skin
    Its like a fresh news paper
    I were so secure there''

    goood

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  2. itz hurting..ur lines r huting so no comments

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  3. poems of tears and blood....excellent

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  4. why it is that you cant keep your promise?
    I know that I am keeping mine...

    keep writing

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  5. "Have you ever seen how a raindrop laugh?

    "I could feel the smell of your skin
    Its like a fresh news paper
    I were so secure there"

    You touched....

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  6. really touching lines...very good imagery...keep it up.

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  7. "its like a fresh news paper
    i were so secure there"...

    These lines are so touching as the
    thought itself.and very much rhyming.
    (with poetic licence)..

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