Do you remember,we were traveling ..
It was raining,heavily,with all the rhythms
We were traveling without a reason,destiny
you asked me one thing,I will never forget
Have you ever seen how a raindrop laugh?
I gazed at you with all my passions
We were sharing a shawl.
I could feel the smell of your skin
Its like a fresh news paper
I were so secure there
My conscience was melting
I opened my eyes with a slight alarm
I felt those raindrops on my cheek
It was worth every second of bliss
I remember that kiss like it was now
I wanted to stay in rain.
Every time I think of that moment
I think of my raindrop kiss.
I will be traveling this weekend
but you wont be there
why it is that you cant keep your promise?
I know that I am keeping mine...
Saturday, June 6, 2009
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''I could feel the smell of your skin
ReplyDeleteIts like a fresh news paper
I were so secure there''
goood
itz hurting..ur lines r huting so no comments
ReplyDeletepoems of tears and blood....excellent
ReplyDeleteSmell of Darkness....
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Blog
why it is that you cant keep your promise?
ReplyDeleteI know that I am keeping mine...
keep writing
"Have you ever seen how a raindrop laugh?
ReplyDelete"I could feel the smell of your skin
Its like a fresh news paper
I were so secure there"
You touched....
really touching lines...very good imagery...keep it up.
ReplyDeleteur lines r huting...
ReplyDelete"its like a fresh news paper
ReplyDeletei were so secure there"...
These lines are so touching as the
thought itself.and very much rhyming.
(with poetic licence)..